You are very descriptive. I love it. Your choice of words allows for such amazing emotion. I love this. I love how you show her struggle. You are very good at writing. Good grief. I’m jealous. You have completely got my attention with this. Good job and keep up the good work.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! She didn't deserve to die!! He loved her D: And she loved him. They could have had a long and happy life but noooo! *Breaks down crying* Why!?!?!? WHY!?!??!
This had to be one of the best things I've read. The last chapter had my sobbing.|: It was absolutely amazing.<3 You have yet to disappoint me with your writing.
Yup, there it goes. I knew this was going to happen, but for some reason I hoped it wouldn't. This was amazing. Sad, tragic, heartbreaking, but amazing. I wish she hadn't of died tho... =\ Poor Bryan.
This is so sad, Molly. It literally brought tears to my eyes... I can't wait to read chapter three, but I wish there was some way to make it a happy ending. You know I'm a sucker for those... I think, anyway. Update soon?
Poor girl =\ I wonder what's wrong with her... You better update soon, becayse I need to know what happens. O.O O.O O.O ^^^ face is made because of what you just told me over the phone. About the first part of chapter two. That you better post, since you said you had the intentions to. And if you don't know what I mean by now, I'm going to smack your forehead and yell 'EYEBROWS, SLUTBAG' like I did to Max last night. =DDD UPDATE SOON!
December 16th, 2010 at 05:45pm
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