Awh, thank you for thanking me. I like being thanked ^_^
I love this story, and I like the way it's so detailed. But being the perfectionist I am, I have to ask you to write "because" and "cool" instead of "becuz" and "kool".
Other than that, there's nothing that I can think of to mention. Your writing is prettyful ^_^
The big question is, why don't you have more comments?