Wake up Under the Sun - Comments

  • outthewindow.

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    So I haven't commented since I first found this story, but something about this chapter made me feel as though I had to.
    I can't really say what exactly it was that made me want to comment.
    Maybe it was the general sense of hope I found in the chapter, especially toward the end, when John says he'll wait.
    I just want to say that just because I don't really have time to comment, it doesn't mean I love this story any less.
    It's probably one of the best I've read on the site.
    September 17th, 2011 at 12:27pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    Oh Laney, you lying slut................. I love you so much, but I hate you too. I'm not sure I've ever felt that way about a character. Good work on that, friend! =)
    September 17th, 2011 at 11:44am
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    Lol I always have to skim the lat chapter bc I forget what happens.
    September 16th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Oohh I can't believe they kissed!!
    I bet John finds out somehow and gets super jealous
    I hope he and Delaney can work everything out though!
    September 4th, 2011 at 03:53pm
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Damn, if John were to hear about that kiss...Weow.
    Still not happy with John and Delaney breaking up..
    They need each other.
    Please update soon.
    [:
    September 4th, 2011 at 02:16pm
  • thescenekid

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    Your update is definetly the best!! Since halvo is the love of my life and they kissed! Holy guacs i love it keep uodating early!! :)
    September 4th, 2011 at 01:09pm
  • SixFeetUnder11

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    Oh man, I had a feeling that kiss would happen. I hope Halvo doesn't get any ideas..... Anyway, I was sooooo excited when I saw you updated! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    September 4th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • beukeboom

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    I just found this story tonight & I can already say I'm completely in love with it. Can't say I'm too happy with John and Delaney breaking up, though. Hahah. I really hope they work things out, and that you update this soon! :)
    September 2nd, 2011 at 07:12am
  • thescenekid

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    Omg when will you update. I'm dying here. Your fanfic is the best
    August 30th, 2011 at 04:14pm
  • revenge_is_mine

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    :( this was so sad :(
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:26pm
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Damn, I think I'm starting to fall into the 'Team Kennedy' category and I'm not liking it.
    John is being such a bitch, he needs to be bitch slapped, bitches love that.
    And that kiss, UGH.
    Perfectly imperfect.
    But nevertheless Delaney and John are better off together.
    August 10th, 2011 at 01:24pm
  • liar's lane.

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    I know this is a John story, but I'm so team Kennedy it's ridiculous. John is being a bitch, it started first when Kennedy had to make sure she was okay when the fan called her ugly. That's when I became team Kennedy. Screw John.
    PS. Sorry I fell off the face of the earth! Haha!
    August 8th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • unforgiven anchors

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    URGHHHHHHHHH! What the hell had gotten into John!? I am so angry that this has all happened! >:( I really hope Delaney doesn't sleep with Austin. That would break my heart.
    August 8th, 2011 at 04:15pm
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    I'm glad Kennedy kissed her :-) John was a dick. But I do kind of hope that John and her work things out, but then again, I kinda want her with Kennedy..
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • SixFeetUnder11

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    Oh my god, the part where Lex was going on about how she would "fuck him up" was hysterical. John is a piece of work, god. I want him to be immensely pissed off when he see's Austin with her. That'll show him. Can't wait for the next update! :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Great chapter!!
    And yay Austin Gibbs!
    I hope John does get super pissed
    August 7th, 2011 at 05:59pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    oh, John O'Callaghan... you stupid son of a bitch. Laney should have hit him and fucking told him what she wanted to say in front of all those girls. Then he coulda showed those kids how much of a dick he actually was.
    August 7th, 2011 at 11:27am
  • doesn'tbelieveinlove

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    quite possibly my favorite line of the chapter: " I don’t care if he’s a skyscraper, I will fuck him up.”

    it made me chuckle lol :)
    August 7th, 2011 at 08:26am
  • arduous

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    :o Holy moly! I can't wait to read more!
    August 7th, 2011 at 08:24am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    OH SNAP!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    UPDATE! :D
    :]
    August 7th, 2011 at 07:00am