Room Seven. - Comments

Hmm. In all constructive criticism, I liked the old one better. But, hey, as long as your back, hmm?

I hope you stick with us!

Sooooo happy that you're back! I've missed this so much. :)

I love it! Can't wait for more. :)

I'm so glad that you're back! I missed this story like hell, and I'll admit to checking up on it every now and then, haha. Hopefully we'll get back to where we were up to relatively soon, because I was very anxious to see where their relationship was heading. But I'll stick by you through this re-write, because I have great confidence in your writing and your ability to blow me away for a second time!

I didn't notice much different about this chapter, but I could be being daft. (: I like that you've kept her problems the same, and how you've kept his personality and morals in the same place as they were. Because as you know, I always thought that the two of them were perfect for each other, so it's good that you haven't changed them around too much.

Your writing's beautiful girl, and I hope that all's well for you. Thank you for coming back and writing this story, and I'll be waiting dutifully for more updates. XD Oh, and if you need help with anything again, just send me a message and I'll help you out all you need. (:

I'm sure th rewrittn story will be even better than the original:) update soon please?

Love it, please update soon? =D

Whoa! This kind of saddens me :( but I shall be loyal and stick by your story, hopefully you'll update quickly though :)

Reading this for the first time and i think it's brilliant (:

I can't follow this story after the second paragraph:

Lilly pursed her lips and averted her gaze from the ruddy cheeked woman standing before her with head tilted in curiosity. Apparently Jacqueline, her usually air headed pharmacist and close friend that she saw every seven weeks in their current position was more perceptive than she’d granted for.

"with her head tilted" I think you mean. air-headed is a compound modifier. "close friend that she saw every seven weeks in their current position" doesn't really make sense. I think you need a comma after position. And I'd remove the "usually." So yea, this piece needs a lot of work. That's only the second paragraph.

I'm glad you decided to continue with this story =) please keep it up

I'm sure I subscribed to this before....and I'm definitely subscribing again!
This is amazing, I can't wait to read more!

^where We were.

Wow. Should have warned me.I STILL remember this story quite well & I was expecting a brand new chapter.
Not to be back at chapter one. But It's okay. Now I'm just anxious to see what you change and what you leave from the old chapters. & to get back on track where were.

Hi, i know it says hiatus on the page... but i really like this story so please write more. =)

Ahhh. This is so incredible. It's freaking awesome I tell you. That's all that I can say and honestly what is with all this cliffhanger?? What the hell did James Magnus do? You have to update this instant missy!! :))

She should buy him clothes.
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I am so sorry for not commenting on the last chapter! I've been away a lot so I never got the chance to read it... so sorry again!

I love this story so much, and I love how you're giving us information in tiny snippets. It's a great way to keep people intrigued.

Also, people with OCD can't drink alcohol, especially not when they're on medication. They can drink a little bit, but not enough to get tipsy or drunk. When they drink alcohol along with being on medication, they throw up a lot and it can be really dangerous for their health.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing where things go from now on. I'm so happy that you have more supporters now -- you definitely deserve it!

Loved both chapters :3

OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE QUICKERRRRR

Wondefrul stuff! You need to writ emore PLEASE!

More man more!!!!!