The Best Surprise - Comments

Oh yeah! Sorry about the grammar, I'm not the best, but I'll edit it so that there's no confusion with the story. Thanks a lot (: And well, the idea of the story was to show the girl's reaction.. Be sure I'll check the results..

I'm commenting for the competition. =)

As far as I'm aware, no rules were broken. Although, the grammar in a fair few places wasn't correct. Things such as: The Perfect Christmas was were he was. Where did he went?

The content and the idea was pretty on the mark. Very comforting, and the way you wrote the main character's reaction to her surprise was very nice, it made me smile. :]

Thanks, check for the results by Christmas. :)