I'll Be There for You; As the World Falls Down - Comments

  • SBurgundy

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    I can't believe I just found this story! & it's complete already! Luckily I get to enjoy it without waiting :)

    I've only read the first chapter so far, and yet I'm hooked! I like how you went into detail of her day and described how her siblings and stepfather treated her, it made me feel tired just reading it! I found myself finding a connection with your character from some similarites, it's always good to make that connection with characters, for me anyways.

    I'm so glad there's actually Labyrinth FF on here! I had yet to find any good ones, and TA DAH yours popped up! I fell in love with the movie, such a great classic that everyone should watch.

    Since you're done with this story, I can't really say 'I can't wait for more!', but I will comment again when I'm done!
    March 19th, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • LooksthatkillA7X

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    OH MY GOTH!!! It was soooooooo cute!!! awws
    February 11th, 2011 at 04:38pm
  • kittyny1

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    Lovely can't wait for updates(:
    February 2nd, 2011 at 01:32pm
  • Synyer

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    Duh duh duh dum!
    Cliff hanger (:
    You must update soon, I want to know what he is going to say
    January 25th, 2011 at 02:27pm
  • LooksthatkillA7X

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    I super duper f-ing love this story its absolutely amazing and toast. update soon
    January 21st, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • Synyer

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    This update was really sweet.
    It will be no time before there a cute happy couple (:
    I'm not sure if it will be all happy endings at first though (:
    January 21st, 2011 at 12:03am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    I haven't ever seen Labyrinth Fiction on here before. I love this! :D
    It's so well written [:
    January 20th, 2011 at 01:37pm
  • the boy with bread.

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    :O Labyrinth. I love that movie, so i'm sure i'll love this too XD
    January 20th, 2011 at 08:35am
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Not gonna lie I'd make it a daily occurance! Hehe Jareth's a hard guy to wake up apparently.
    January 17th, 2011 at 02:09pm
  • Synyer

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    first ever labyrinth fiction i have seen on here, and i'm liking this, alot.
    January 17th, 2011 at 02:52am
  • LooksthatkillA7X

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    I absolutely love this story I hope you continue more. lol
    January 16th, 2011 at 01:59am
  • linanamistar

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    I've got to apologize for subscribing and not commenting. I was quite intrigued about the story from reading the first chapter and thought about commenting after I read all the chapters. Since I finally finished, I absolutely like your story. The Masquerade Ball is always fun to read because of its romantic atmosphere. You are doing a great job.
    January 13th, 2011 at 03:39am
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Not even the slightest bit of inkling as to who it was??? Jareth would be my first suspicion if I didn't see him somewhere else.
    January 12th, 2011 at 02:03pm
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Now I gotta look up stargazer lilly
    January 11th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Did Abigail forget that taking people wish away is his job?
    January 4th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    yay love!!!
    December 29th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    Awww cute they're getting along!!!
    December 26th, 2010 at 06:44pm
  • Pineapplez

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    Thanks for finding the time to update. I hope you're having a great Christmas. :D yay for plot development. :D
    December 25th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • PrincesssofDarknesss

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    YAY!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    December 24th, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • Austin Ashby

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    I haven't read this story (I plan on doing so !) But I noticed the story was based on the movie THE LABYRINTH ! I ABSOLUTELY LLLOOOVVVEE THAT MOVIE !! Haha !!
    December 24th, 2010 at 04:41pm