hi i realllllllllly love this book this was thefirst book i read on this site and im pretty much going to stay because of it keep up the good work cant wait to see wat happens :)
This is amazing ^^ it makes me want to copy the key to the chocolate factory and give it back to you ^^ lol <3 Zeke is....well...Zeke...and I love Luna!!!
hey! i love this story! :D the only thing i think you can improve on is maybe instead of writting really short chapters, spend time thinking and writting to make it longer. im not sure how others think but i would much prefer to have to wait a little while for a update if its a long chapter rather then updating quickly with tiny chapters. :D anyway keep up the good work!!