Ghosts and Whispers - Comments

Tear. It's over.

Smile. Cute epilogue.

Sorry it took me so long to read this--I've been sort of preoccupied with my new boy toy. ;) :P (As well as exam prep and ISP's, but that's not nearly as fun....)

Thanks for the mention (you shouldn't have). I do it because I love your work, and I know how good a comment can make you feel at the end of a bad day.

I look forward to what comes next, Gem!

I loved this story! Great job!!!

Awwww, yay! She's happy now and away from the stupid Levarux (still can't spell it!) and the orphanage! This story rocked my colorful socks! You're an amazing writer! *hugs*

woww this storie was great

At least she got out of there. Stupid cop guy wanted to arrest her. Can't wait to read more!

WHOA! That is not right! That's like pedophile only worse I think....Can't wait to see what happens next!

Who, exactly, would have expected that? I mean, the first part was pretty obvious, but the fact that M. Leveaux is a creeper and Molly's father.
I'm really anxious to find out what's going to happen next.
Brobdingnagian update! (Yes, that's a word. It means unusually great.)

Yay. Update.
A marvellous one, too, if I do say so myself.
Mr. Leveaux creeps me out now. He kind of always did, but now I'm especially creeped out.
And Molly scares me. A lot. Devil child!
Um... that's all I have to say. Except that, just out of curiosity, do you pronounce the "X" in the Leveaux name, or like it's French (and therefore silent)?

Serial killer! Is Mr. Levarux (sorry I can't spell for my life and I'm to lazy to go back) a perverted old freak?! Run Molly! Save yourself! Can't wait for the next update!

Wow. Graphic much? I decided earlier that stupendous was my word of the day, so that is how I choose to describe this chapter.

Don't ever apologise. With only five weeks left of the school year, we all understand the hassle of projects and exams. (Yuck.) Besides, you're better than 80% of the writers on the site even if you're not at your stupendous-est.

Two things that I just have to say:
1) OH MY GOD, THERE'S A GUY ON MIBBA AND HE READ YOUR STORY! Be happy. You get a spot in the hall of fame. :P
2) It's pretty funny that someone is telling you to watch your grammar and spelled "grammar" wrong.

~~~~Keep Your Friends Close and Your Muses Closer

That poor kid!! Dang, what's going on?!??!?!?! (heehee lots of punctuatuion) Can't wait to find out what's happening!!

Awesome xD

It's nice to find a story on here that isn't a band fanfiction - this is original and interesting. May I suggest watching your grammer - it's pretty good, just a few occasional slips =]

Hi. =]
I'm proper random but I found this by chance and its boss so I thought I'd tell you.
It has interested me so I want to read more.

Damn... I wanted the page claim.

As to the update, I can't say that I didn't see it coming, but I love it anyway.

And of course, it makes things ten times more interesting, because now I want to know what's going to happen. Great chapter!

Extreme violence sounds pretty wicked, too.

Whoo! Extreme violence!! Um....I mean uh yay update! Yeah....I'm not crazy what're you talking about? Anywho great update and can't wait for the next one!

All will be revealed my pretties!

Next chapter may involve extreme violence... we'll see!

No Molly can't be in the hospital!! Please update soon so I can find out what in the world is going on!

I'm running out of adjectives to use! It was awesome again. I'll find a thesaurus for the next chapter.

Anyway, I didn't think it was much of a filler--what's up with that lady in the room, and the little "in my day" comment. Was she at the orphanage, too? Or do I have to wait and find out?

Ooh... cliffhanger.
You suck. Well, okay, actually, you rock, and so does this chapter. But cliffhangers kinda suck.
Rock on.

Ah no! What's going on??!!! This doesn't seem right!! Please update!!