March 24th, 2011 at 12:54am
The way this is written in short chapters is really interesting. Not many authors I've read could make a fic that sets the mood and tells a great story in so few words- it takes good writing to accomplish this without the piece feeling bare or choppy.
However you've done it perfectly. I'm already addicted and looking forward to updates! :)
I love how you can take a story and tell it in little words like that.
It's very unique.