January 18th, 2008 at 05:00pm
-attempts to comment again-
yay rach!
I liked this; how you explained enough, but not so much as to not leave it open to wild speculation and imagination.
The relationship between Peter and Crystal is something of a curiosity. It gives the vibe of a "he doesn't know how she feels," but at the same time, it doesn't. There's something more there.
And the last line throws a whole extra level into it. What could it mean? Why can't she forgive? What happened?
You do realise I will bug you about this, right?
But nonetheless, yay ^^
i love it rach :)
more soon please
and don't give up on it hunni
Mrs abster Bryar xXx