You know, I wrote a drabble with the same picture, and I thought it would be very interesting to see how someone else would interpret the same pictures. I have to say, I absolutely love yours a whole lot better ;]
Some parts were choppy, but it just added more the feeling of the story, if that makes any sense. And I kind of felt sorry for the person since they were all like--use me, crush me, etc. This particular line stood out to me for some reason: Then you picked me up in your fingers, and destroyed me to the very atom.
Overall, great story, it was a very interesting read :)
Some parts were choppy, but it just added more the feeling of the story, if that makes any sense. And I kind of felt sorry for the person since they were all like--use me, crush me, etc. This particular line stood out to me for some reason: Then you picked me up in your fingers, and destroyed me to the very atom.
Overall, great story, it was a very interesting read :)