Hey ! This is a great story, I've already subscribed to it :) Only critique is to watch your grammar, punctuation etc.. Other than that, well done ! This is awesome !!
Hey I finally got around to reading it.sorry I took so long.This is really good.If you need any information for writing this just give me a shout,trust me I know too much haha.Keep it up. <3<3 Becca.
please dont wait till next year to update! this is really good! and awesome ending to the intro! my 6th grade L.A teacher would love that! yea too bad she was an evil butt!
This is really interesting...in a good way! I can't wait for more. I think it will be really interestin to see the way their mom treats each of the differently. And the way Ryan treats them.