I Want You Bad - Comments

Wow; I've said it before and I'll say it again; You are an amazing author :file:
I loved that. : D
And to the comment above me...I know aye. :XD
Lmfao (:
I loved it; I can't wait till you get back from your holiday. =]

OMG! Reading that made my stomach so tight! It turned me on, WOW! LOve your story and love the one shot! Never stop writing!

This was fantastic, I loved it.

my god bonnie tyler total elclipse of the heart amazing song <3

frggin amazing!!!
I actually don't have any critisism except that you should definately write lyk a thousand more one shots 4 everyone =)

^^^ neither can i
it took forever to read this but it was so worth it!
your writing deserves a medal
actually it deserves millions of em xoxox

You want negative critism...? Well to be honest...I can't give you any!!!
This
Is
Awesome!!!!
Seriously, I think it was perfect ^.^

:o 4 stars... I feel loved <3

omg i LOVE your stories lol
you write hott boysex ;)
ok so this rocks
=D

Toro's Way:

Okay i want to make this comment as long and exciting as possible :D

This one-shot was incredile, so amazing actually that yes i did comment before it was up..and if my net hadnt died i would have read it last night!
But nooo.

This was soo good and really descriptive and got like all the right info and thats hard to do with a one-shot so yay well done to the awesome one...you :D

And you know when your stories are well i guess you could say famous, its when the story titles are abbreviated just like yours are A.I.Y.H.S.B

And yes well done and i hope you have awesome times :D

*hugs*

xxx

Awww thank you **hugs back**

karenlee:

I have no criticism, you are an amazing writer, But i can't help but wonder where Gerard was going. You never told us! now you must write another one shot to tell us why Gerard kept leaving, that would be so cool or maybe i should say HOT!

getting out of his bunk, leaving me laying there. I don't know where he went,

before walking off to somewhere. It was so funny how he would just walk around the bus, naked,

(after thought check out my poems, criticise away)

That is a good point. I'll keep that in mind for when I write future stories.

Okay i want to make this comment as long and exciting as possible :D

This one-shot was incredile, so amazing actually that yes i did comment before it was up..and if my net hadnt died i would have read it last night!
But nooo.

This was soo good and really descriptive and got like all the right info and thats hard to do with a one-shot so yay well done to the awesome one...you :D

And you know when your stories are well i guess you could say famous, its when the story titles are abbreviated just like yours are A.I.Y.H.S.B

And yes well done and i hope you have awesome times :D

*hugs*

xxx

I have no criticism, you are an amazing writer, But i can't help but wonder where Gerard was going. You never told us! now you must write another one shot to tell us why Gerard kept leaving, that would be so cool or maybe i should say HOT!

getting out of his bunk, leaving me laying there. I don't know where he went,

before walking off to somewhere. It was so funny how he would just walk around the bus, naked,

(after thought check out my poems, criticise away)

That was VERY good. Your style is a lot more confident, though of course the plot is sort of similar to your main story (minus all the stupid embarrassing things they made each other do). It was VERY well written! Thanks!

This was absolutely perfect.
EEK. Bravo :D

This is FABULOUS..
Woo!
I loved all of it...
<33

^^ Haha, you had me for a sec, and I was like - finally someone hates it!!! lol... but I was mistaken!
Thanks for liking! :D

okay honestly i didn't like it one bit.

OMG I AM TOTALLY JOKING!
it was awesome the boysex was awesome (just like always LOL)
WOOOO

^^ Thankyou :D

HOLY SHIT!
that was fucking hot.
i mean like...
WOW
that was AWESOME!

you rule you really do!