January 19th, 2008 at 04:25am
I Want You Bad - Comments
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OMG! Reading that made my stomach so tight! It turned me on, WOW! LOve your story and love the one shot! Never stop writing!January 19th, 2008 at 03:54am
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This was fantastic, I loved it.January 19th, 2008 at 12:41am
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my god bonnie tyler total elclipse of the heart amazing song <3January 18th, 2008 at 09:10pm
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frggin amazing!!!
I actually don't have any critisism except that you should definately write lyk a thousand more one shots 4 everyone =)January 18th, 2008 at 08:15pm -
^^^ neither can i
it took forever to read this but it was so worth it!
your writing deserves a medal
actually it deserves millions of em xoxoxJanuary 18th, 2008 at 07:53pm -
You want negative critism...? Well to be honest...I can't give you any!!!
This
Is
Awesome!!!!
Seriously, I think it was perfect ^.^January 18th, 2008 at 06:32pm -
:o 4 stars... I feel loved <3January 18th, 2008 at 08:34am
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omg i LOVE your stories lol
you write hott boysex ;)
ok so this rocks
=DJanuary 18th, 2008 at 04:57am -
Awww thank you **hugs back**- Toro's Way:
- Okay i want to make this comment as long and exciting as possible :D
This one-shot was incredile, so amazing actually that yes i did comment before it was up..and if my net hadnt died i would have read it last night!
But nooo.
This was soo good and really descriptive and got like all the right info and thats hard to do with a one-shot so yay well done to the awesome one...you :D
And you know when your stories are well i guess you could say famous, its when the story titles are abbreviated just like yours are A.I.Y.H.S.B
And yes well done and i hope you have awesome times :D
*hugs*
xxx
January 18th, 2008 at 04:25am -
That is a good point. I'll keep that in mind for when I write future stories.- karenlee:
- I have no criticism, you are an amazing writer, But i can't help but wonder where Gerard was going. You never told us! now you must write another one shot to tell us why Gerard kept leaving, that would be so cool or maybe i should say HOT!
getting out of his bunk, leaving me laying there. I don't know where he went,
before walking off to somewhere. It was so funny how he would just walk around the bus, naked,
(after thought check out my poems, criticise away)
January 18th, 2008 at 04:25am -
Okay i want to make this comment as long and exciting as possible :D
This one-shot was incredile, so amazing actually that yes i did comment before it was up..and if my net hadnt died i would have read it last night!
But nooo.
This was soo good and really descriptive and got like all the right info and thats hard to do with a one-shot so yay well done to the awesome one...you :D
And you know when your stories are well i guess you could say famous, its when the story titles are abbreviated just like yours are A.I.Y.H.S.B
And yes well done and i hope you have awesome times :D
*hugs*
xxxJanuary 18th, 2008 at 02:55am -
I have no criticism, you are an amazing writer, But i can't help but wonder where Gerard was going. You never told us! now you must write another one shot to tell us why Gerard kept leaving, that would be so cool or maybe i should say HOT!
getting out of his bunk, leaving me laying there. I don't know where he went,
before walking off to somewhere. It was so funny how he would just walk around the bus, naked,
(after thought check out my poems, criticise away)January 18th, 2008 at 02:52am -
That was VERY good. Your style is a lot more confident, though of course the plot is sort of similar to your main story (minus all the stupid embarrassing things they made each other do). It was VERY well written! Thanks!January 18th, 2008 at 02:34am
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This was absolutely perfect.
EEK. Bravo :DJanuary 18th, 2008 at 02:11am -
This is FABULOUS..
Woo!
I loved all of it...
<33January 18th, 2008 at 02:10am -
^^ Haha, you had me for a sec, and I was like - finally someone hates it!!! lol... but I was mistaken!
Thanks for liking! :DJanuary 18th, 2008 at 01:28am -
okay honestly i didn't like it one bit.
OMG I AM TOTALLY JOKING!
it was awesome the boysex was awesome (just like always LOL)
WOOOOJanuary 18th, 2008 at 01:25am -
^^ Thankyou :DJanuary 18th, 2008 at 12:50am
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HOLY SHIT!
that was fucking hot.
i mean like...
WOW
that was AWESOME!
you rule you really do!January 18th, 2008 at 12:39am
I loved that. : D
And to the comment above me...I know aye. :XD
Lmfao (:
I loved it; I can't wait till you get back from your holiday. =]