Cold - Comments

Aw, Jennie, I love this so much! I love how you broke out of the whole "Mikey's Shy and Never Talks Ever At All and When He Does He's Monosyllabic" trope.

:D

It's absolutely adorable and I love how you touched on Gerard getting kicked out of that band and focusing on his art. It was probably my favorite detail.

Lovely, you lovely thing.

This was so cute. Mikey wasn't all shy. So is going to be all one shots or are you going to turn it into a story?

^ I'm pretty sure my face is a curious mixture of both those two smilies right now. I loved this so much.

Though I think Her brain wand heart should be Her brain and heart, right?
(You've got wands on the brain, Jennie, wands on the brain. )
And (hat, gloves, jacket, ect.) should be (hat, gloves, jacket, etc.)
And I knew I’d find you here when your mom said you went for a walk,” should have speech marks at the start.
And and another emotions appeared on her face - I'm not sure what this should be but it doesn't sound right. other emotions? another emotion?

But yeah, this was so adorable and so cute and oh, Mikey being all fierce and protective and adorable is the cutest thing ever, swear to God. And now I just want to hug Anette forever and ever and make her smile all the time and never be sad again. Or... maybe I could just let Mikey take care of that. I'm sure neither of them would have any objections.