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  • somebody_who_cares

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    January 13th, 2011 at 05:19am
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    SO, what can I say? 1) I am so totally glad that I read this/found this. 2) I am literally in LOVE with Sophie. 3) I LOL'D at the line: "When John comes home I want you to meet him. He is the greatest boy ever. He writes his owns lyrics and plays the gutair and plays the piano. And he teaches me how to play both. And his band mates are cool. I like his bassist, he is called Garrett. But also Kennedy is good." (I could just picture her saying this. :-) 4) I literally cried when I realized that you only had 7 chapters so far. 5) I'm going to stop typing now because this is the longest comment that I have probably wrote on here and you probably know my love and affection for this story. :-) I can't wait for your update! OH and 6) (I swear this is the last one) I absolutly love the name "Lauren" and I also laughed when I saw that your main charcter was named "Lauren." Every Charcter that I have in my stories are named "Lauren" and I have no idea why. It's just an awesome name. :-) Ok, This is all.
    January 12th, 2011 at 12:26am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    John's so cute with his little sister(:
    January 11th, 2011 at 04:06am
  • drea_uhoh

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    sophia is too adorable.
    can't wait for john! lol
    and as always loved the update!
    January 11th, 2011 at 01:03am
  • berryobsession

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    I loved it, I loved it, I looooooooved it
    great job girl!
    Please updste as soon as possible :D
    January 11th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • Black Veil Brides

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    Amazingamazingamazing update!
    Lauren FINALLY listened to them.
    :D
    January 11th, 2011 at 12:24am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Yay! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Update soooon!!!
    John is such a sweetheart to Sophia
    January 11th, 2011 at 12:03am
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    January 7th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Aww that was adorable. Update soon?
    January 7th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • drea_uhoh

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    Sophie is really cute :3
    can't wait for more! :]
    January 7th, 2011 at 02:16am
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    January 5th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    :) I liiike this!
    January 4th, 2011 at 06:18am
  • Black Veil Brides

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    Good update.
    A few more chapters?
    EEEP. :D
    January 4th, 2011 at 06:07am
  • laurenj23

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    it's seems like sophie and lauren are getting close, it's cute :) and can't wait for john o!
    January 4th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Can't wait for John to come in! Update soon!!!
    January 4th, 2011 at 02:43am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Heyy this is a really good story definitely keep at it!!!!
    January 4th, 2011 at 12:16am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Heyy this is a really good story definitely keep at it!!!!
    January 4th, 2011 at 12:16am
  • drea_uhoh

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    i love this story.
    ^^ yup different concept indeed.
    i can't wait to see where it's headed; and these fillers do not annoy me :3
    January 3rd, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • BUSTANUT

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    I really loved this! Such a different concept, i'm actually jealous i didn't think of it myself! hahaha.
    I can't wait till John comes home and how you'd represent his character.

    Update NOW!
    Because i am hooked.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • drea_uhoh

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    i really like it! and i can't wait to see where its headed!
    you made the little sibling sound soo bad haha, i thought she was going to kill lauren or something! haha
    but i love it. and can't wait for more! :3
    December 30th, 2010 at 08:15am
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