Ahhhh!! Me likey!! hahaha. I think the little girl is so adorable. This is so how I would be acting if I was forced to babysit all summer. Oh! The comment two above me reminded me- I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THE KITCHEN!!!!!!!!!!!! I looked at it, and I was like O.O It's so beautiful!
Sooo yeahhhh. Happy Holidays, and tell your family the same :D
First off, the concept for this story is really good. Like, I've never come across anything like it before on Mibba, ya know? Probably cause no one just gives John a sister.. But whatever xP I like it. Second. I started laughing at the whole thing of spending time on the internet. YES MRS. SORENSON IT IS FUN!!!!! Hahah. It totally reminded me of my mom trying to pry me away from Tumblr. Every time she thinks she won, she really doesn't, cause I have a tumblr app on my phone xD But yeah, I really like this. Already. There's nothing I can critique in it at all. I probably wouldn't have written it better if I tried and had Shakespeare at my side.
Wow, that was lame.
So I hope you enjoyed your first [of many] long comment. :D