So I adore the first chapter. It was written amazingly, but I'm a bit confused. One minute she's on the beach, and the next she's back in the van? :O
Other than that, though, this story is amazing. I'd love to find out what happens next. So update soon, please? I'm fairly sure that this is the only James Cassels story on here, and it'd be a shame if it wasn't updated. Not that I should be talking, being that I'm not so good with updating... Still, though. I quite literally need to find out what happens next.