"No, no, wait. I think I know. Tall, dark hair. Few moles on his face? Looks like he can't count up to five?" he asked. I died laughing at that! Gotta love Patrick Kane!
I love all the details you use, esp when she's skating! I love it because it gives me a clear image in my head, which is awesome!
I love how Jon trys to play all cool when trying to find out information about Annabelle. He's all like, 'be cool'! Just admit you like her Jon and that you want to know more about her. Guess I could say the same for Annabelle then? Evan is so sneaky in this story. There is something about him that I don't like. It seems like he'll be big trouble later on in the story, and I can't wait to see if I'm right or wrong about that!
I only got to five chapters, but I really love this! I'm going to read some more when I wake up tomorrow! :)