December 23rd, 2010 at 02:36pm
Love, love, love it so far. Thought I'd mention that.
I miss Karlee too...but this will be just as good, yeah? A different style, but good nonetheless. Can't expect anything else from you after you delivered two stories that kept me hooked :)
I found a mistake early on: after the second pearl, you said she sat by Andy and showed her, but she IS Andy, so maybe you meant Aimee? Haha, nothing big, but I did a superhuge doubletake there to make sure I read it right...
I still want a Pax. Even if he does like Andy instead. :)
Love this story!!! Until your next awesome update xDDD
I got really confused thinking "What the hell? Which date is first which one isn't?"
But then on the third chapter it all cleared up because when you say about how Karlee is oblivious to Trey's affection to her.
So I'm just checking now, Andy is thinking of the months before the present day in which it is Crimbo (the only day ever kid gets up early by choice) and she is talking to Pax who is asking her if she's every thought of a 'them' and talking about the fling they had the summer when he was 'consoling' her because of something Gage (someone I already dislike) did?
Okay please keep updating!