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  • instela

    instela (100)

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    "The first time I had witnessed her of a heart attack her mom was screaming." I don't think that makes sense because of 'her of'.

    "Shee looks at me."

    "forevers"

    Other then those few things, this is quite interesting. I hope you update soon c:. (I'll be looking out for this.)
    August 21st, 2013 at 04:49pm
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