Anorexia is Beauty is Terror. - Comments

Beautiful! Absolutely wonderful!

I cannot say anything that heat rash. hasn't already said. Other than you get five of five Synclayre stars.

Oh wow. This is so powerful and so real. As a recovering anorexic, this speaks great lengths to me, it reminds of how I felt and how horrible it was and just makes such an impact. Wow. As for your attempt at second person, very well done, the narration is beautiful. Lines like this: what a terror it was to feel the pounds slip from your body, make your ribs crack with each breath from the pure strain of the marrow-filled structures make the story. I hope you understand how much talent you have.

The last line, just gah, there is so much power in it. I love it.