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Monster - Comments
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Update pretty please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!December 16th, 2013 at 08:06pm
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Please update!:)July 24th, 2013 at 10:10pm
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Update please?
Kthxbai <3March 26th, 2013 at 04:10pm -
Ummm yea updateJune 18th, 2012 at 06:53am
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I read all the chapters last night, and I'm hooked! I subscribed too. So please updated soon. Pweeeeaaase :DFebruary 29th, 2012 at 09:03pm
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Damn victor...
Btw, I need and update!
My addiction for this story isn't getting better without the updates!
*Bounces off the walls*February 1st, 2012 at 08:48pm -
This plot is amazing you have no idea how excited i got when I saw there was an update.January 2nd, 2012 at 07:41am
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Oh my God. That shit was crazy and I loved your update but I hated that with Victor. Dd THANK YOU FOR COMING BACK!!!!!!December 30th, 2011 at 06:18pm
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Greeeat!December 28th, 2011 at 09:20pm
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I love this story, and i sent you a messageDecember 28th, 2011 at 09:16pm
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DAMN IT EVE!
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Blake and Damien better get her the Fawk out of there!!! D:<
I want Blake...o.o;
Like seriously. I WANT Blake xD
MINE MINE MINE!!! :)
PLEASE update soooooonnnn!!! :)December 28th, 2011 at 05:07am -
Just read it all and I love itDecember 27th, 2011 at 09:19pm
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I stayed up til 4 in the morning to read all of this :) veryyy goooood! Now update!December 27th, 2011 at 12:55pm
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so, i just came across this story. i havent read it yet, but i can tell that i will love itDecember 27th, 2011 at 10:17am
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Oh my god this story... I can't even comprehend what I just read :o
I read every chapter just now and this story, is ridiculously amazing.
I never would've expected the twists you put in there... my mind is just all over the place
I can't even pick a favorite vampire (honestly, I want her to get with them all) but it's whatever..
So uh yeah, lol I'm probably just going to awkwardly shuffle out of this comment box now :\December 27th, 2011 at 08:50am -
Finally u updated love this story can't wait 2see wht happensDecember 27th, 2011 at 06:21am
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Whghhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyy?December 27th, 2011 at 06:16am
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YES NEW CHAPTERRR. I get so excited when I get update emails :3December 27th, 2011 at 06:14am
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Still like this story. Thanks for updating, I was happy to see you did :)December 10th, 2011 at 04:07am
The only complain I have is the grammatical errors and how in some places the story seems rushed. Also I found myself re-reading things because I didn't quite understand it, but like I said earlier, I still loved this story.
This story is really good and I noted in the very first Author's Note how you said you were re-posting it for like the third time or something. My advice? When you're done with this story, re-write and fix up the silly errors and re-post it even because it'll be even more amazing. Already its pretty damn amazing!!!! I can see great potential in this, PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD do NOT be one of those author's who simply stop writing and let the story go and only return to it years later. (I do this with my own stories....) Don't take my criticism for the worst, I love this story so much. I've been searching long and hard for a story like this, and trust me I've gone through A LOT of stories. Your story is amazing just needs some work as do all authors stories when they first write it.
Whatever you do keep writing. Update soon please!