This was completely brilliant. I really can't describe how amazing I think this is. The way you write is absolutely wonderful... you should write more, it's great. This has been the best thing I've read lately. There's nothing else I have to say about it.
Ok, so I'm totally not meaning to be a suck up here, but this was amazing. Really, I'm not just saying that because you're my judge. I thought the way you portrayed Brendon and Ryan's relationship was realistic and it was essentially simple and yet there was so much depth. The last lines were my favorite. It also made me sad because I love Ryan Ross/Panic so much.
I kind of wish I could leave this anonymously so I wouldn't seem like im sucking up, but I just had to say this.
I like this story, mainly because I'm pretty much obsessed with Ryan Ross. But, Brendon is kinda giving me the creeps. I guess that's the intention, but stillllll, haha. Anywho! Can't wait for the final chapter! Happy Holidays! XX