Written Tragedies. - Comments

  • The.Secret.Goldfish.

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    Holy shit, this was just incredible!!! I don't know where to start. It was so realistic; I was in tears.
    January 15th, 2011 at 07:21am
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    This was completely brilliant. I really can't describe how amazing I think this is.
    The way you write is absolutely wonderful... you should write more, it's great.
    This has been the best thing I've read lately.
    There's nothing else I have to say about it.
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:21pm
  • Icamane Hatake

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    Dude, Allison... that raged. It was so freaking trippy and... real. Holy shit it was amazing xD

    I think the last chapter was my favorite too, mostly because I have no idea what happened in it but at the same time I did.

    Oh, and the layout was really cool xD

    But honestly, my hands felt funny when I read the part where Brendon smashed the beer bottle. It was that well-written.

    Marry me now XD
    December 31st, 2010 at 01:45am
  • HighOnMisery

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    Ok, so I'm totally not meaning to be a suck up here, but this was amazing. Really, I'm not just saying that because you're my judge. I thought the way you portrayed Brendon and Ryan's relationship was realistic and it was essentially simple and yet there was so much depth. The last lines were my favorite. It also made me sad because I love Ryan Ross/Panic so much.

    I kind of wish I could leave this anonymously so I wouldn't seem like im sucking up, but I just had to say this.

    Brilliant. Truly brilliant.
    December 30th, 2010 at 03:34am
  • incredible_mess

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    I like this story, mainly because I'm pretty much obsessed with Ryan Ross.
    But, Brendon is kinda giving me the creeps. I guess that's the intention, but stillllll, haha.
    Anywho! Can't wait for the final chapter!
    Happy Holidays!
    XX
    December 24th, 2010 at 06:40pm
  • butterfly.kisses.

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    The ending was a little sad, but I still really like the chapter :) Please update soon!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 03:24pm