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  • InOverMyHead

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    I love this story and your writing is just fantastic. I cannot wait for the next update.
    February 27th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • blue-and-dark

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    This story...is like... listening to House of Wolves and drinking coffee at the same time!! It's so good it makes me spasmic!!! Seriously! TOTALLY subscribing...once I figure out how...
    February 23rd, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • HarryPotterFreakie

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    Yay for updates!
    Your teachers are bitches, preventing you from updating.

    ...assholes...
    February 23rd, 2011 at 10:08pm
  • St-Jimmy

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    This story's so good and really well written. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
    February 23rd, 2011 at 08:23pm
  • Stacie

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    You rock my not hypothetical socks! :D I swear if you ever make Sunny go back to the city permanently I will disown you and there will be no cake for you.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 07:04am
  • SHYLA01

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    oh rebel! ;P
    Great update!!
    February 23rd, 2011 at 05:24am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm REALLY happy your updated I missed this story :'(

    I like Gunner and Adren. Adren is a bit of a bitch but besides that she's pretty bad ass there.

    ooh Sunny's a little rebel XD

    Sunny knows by the end she'll wanna stay with the killjoys in the end.

    cant wait to see what the pile is! update soon please
    February 23rd, 2011 at 03:54am
  • It'sMyTime

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    I forgot to mention this before but at the beginning of the desert chapter I got all excited for a moment because I though Sunny was being all deep and intellectual and relating to the desert and enjoying it out there... then I realized she was just delirious.
    also I'm so disappointed in myself for not commenting on the last chapter. I've commented on every chapter except that one and I feel like I failed you!
    Once again I'm so impressed by you! You keep whipping out amazing chapters like its nothing. Seriously. You are awesome.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 03:13am
  • mauricewashere

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    YESSSSSSSSS! UPDATE! *happy dance*
    sunny's comin around! i know it! and so is party poison. i see u, party. i know ur dirty little secret. muhahaha XD
    i love gunner! shes da bomb! if she doesnt turn sunny into a killjoy, nothing will.
    cant waaaaait for the next chapter! <3
    February 23rd, 2011 at 02:36am
  • shelby bree.

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    EXCITEMENT.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 01:35am
  • Pineapplez

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    Who cares about AP bio when there's an update for Playground Eyes in their inbox?! XD Thanks so much for finding hte time to update. :) It was a wonderful distraction. I love the interactions with the characters in this chapter. You've done a great job developing these characters and making their interactions realistic. XD I'm surprised to find that I actually like Gunner a lot. After her coming to such quick conclustions, I didn't think that I would like her, but you did such a good job. :)

    I have to wonder if they'll actually let her go back at the end of her detox...WHAT IF THEY'RE JUST LYING TO HER AND THE MEMORY ERASING PILL DOESN'T REALLY WORK?! I think it would be a great twist. :)

    WAIT A SECOND! WHAT IF THEY THINK IT DOES WORK BUT IT DOESN'T AND SHE GOES BACK AND REMEMBERS EVERYTHING!!!??? They'd all be majorly screwed.

    Does this mean that she's breaking off her relationship with the friendly desert? Poor thing. It doesn't mean to be abusive. I'm sure that it's sorry and will promise to never do it agian. He didn't mean to. He just has a bad bad temper. He'll remember to take his meds next time, no worries. It's not his fault that the Killjoys think he shouldn't take them. They don't understand that they're necessary for him to have healthy relationships. Poor, dear.

    I feel as if Sunny will start chanting soon.
    "i hate this place i've been here for seven years nothing works here the medication doesn't work"
    (I will love you if you get my reference.)
    February 23rd, 2011 at 01:31am
  • SaraCrystelle

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    <3<3<3<3
    I was so happy when i got your comment saying youd be updating soon <3
    I love this storyy.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 12:29am
  • restlessheart

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    It was awesome!! xD I'm loving to new characters!! lol
    February 23rd, 2011 at 12:02am
  • NerdIAm

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    its not the rest of the world that hates on the letter 'u' its just our lazy neighbours the yanks =) lol
    February 18th, 2011 at 05:27am
  • kill your friends;

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    holy cow! you always leave us on suspense! hah aits kinda cool!
    please update soon!
    February 17th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • Stacie

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    I come back from camp and there's yet another fantastical update. The excitement!
    February 12th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • shelby bree.

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    Best story EVER!
    Keep it up!
    February 11th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • restlessheart

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    Yay! I was mentioned!! lol It was amazing!! :D
    February 10th, 2011 at 03:58am
  • K_Shadows

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    Aghhh! I loge this story well writen. My friend Sara_Gates told me about it and I just had to read it (: haha update soon!
    February 9th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • lisha_reading_music

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    hahaha i didn't even notice that you were spelling colour wrong XD yay for canadian way of life! plus, i really like your story, i hope sunny get's Gerard...just sayin'...
    February 9th, 2011 at 03:52am
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