The Two Sides of Jayden Jameson - Comments

That was in a different way beautiful. It was real, heartfelt and the heart ache was nothing but true emotion. You didn't just attempt to make a happy ending, you made this a real believable ending!! It was tearing me a part with every sentence. I wanted to jump into the book and scream and him for doing that to those girls, I just wanted him to realize, it's not just their fault. You made me follow, and become the characters and for that, I applaud you!! Bravo :)

I actually like how the internal struggle between his two loves has substance behind it, as opposed to just being one-dimensional.

i loved reading it from his point of view, and the fact he actually had emotions towards the two girls well written :)

Perfecto! I really hope you write more of this like a continuation or something

Wow. Just wow. This has to be the first thing I read in a guys POV that's actually shocking and moving, despite the explicit part. But it's well written