I love this- the concept, the repetition, the specific examples that you used (especially when you compare it to the examples that you could have used).
Normally, I don't like really short stories, as it usually leaves me wanting more, but this definitely didn't.
That was great! It had a nice flowing feel to it and was really very cute. I was kind of taken back at the end. Not a real person? Great idea! I loved it(:
Normally, I don't like really short stories, as it usually leaves me wanting more, but this definitely didn't.
You did a fantastic job.