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  • Sierra Kusterbeck

    Sierra Kusterbeck (100)

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    I love this- the concept, the repetition, the specific examples that you used (especially when you compare it to the examples that you could have used).

    Normally, I don't like really short stories, as it usually leaves me wanting more, but this definitely didn't.

    You did a fantastic job.
    June 21st, 2011 at 02:44am
  • Evil Angel;

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    I really liked the concept of this little story.
    Well done! =]
    January 24th, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • sicsempertyrannis

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    That was great!
    It had a nice flowing feel to it and was really very cute.
    I was kind of taken back at the end.
    Not a real person?
    Great idea! I loved it(:

    Good Luck!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 01:52am