Oh god, this was beautiful! Your writing was flawless, I couldn't find anything wrong with it in the slightest. I liked how it wasn't all cheesy romantic, you know? It was sweet, simple and very elegant all at the same time. I quite liked it a lot. Amelia is the kind of character that is sort of hard but has a sweet side to her, and Brian was somewhat surly but very sweet. I loved the combination of the two, it was absolutely wonderful! I'm just...speechless at how good that was. The globe at the end was an amazing touch! Simply wonderful, what a great entry! :) <3
I'm just...speechless at how good that was. The globe at the end was an amazing touch! Simply wonderful, what a great entry! :) <3