To Stop The Lies - Comments

Harmony77uk (100)

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deep, powerful and brilliant
I am lost for words here...

January 18th, 2008 at 11:30pm

carcinogenic. (250)

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The last line killed me.

I... I'm pretty much lost for words.
I thought this fic was good while I was reading, & I thought that using
Brian as a fairly objective pair of eyes was perfect, but to be honest, I was
a little skepitcal about why you put Gerard back on drugs in a KTF fic. I sort
of saw the point, but I starting to wonder if there weren't better routes to take.
And then, when I got to that line... :cheese: I swear, those eight words made
the entire fic so powerful. I was just blown away, and everything because
awfully clear. I... I don't even know.
That was horrible, but perfect.
:arms:
Keep the faith.
Amazing, gut-wrenching job.

January 17th, 2008 at 09:49pm

Sheepy (115)

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Holy hell.
That was...
WOW.

Okay, my plans for leaving a decent comment flew out the window when I read this. It's powerful. God, it's powerful.
How they all fell, but he fell furthest.
How they coped, albeit on the edge, and he fell right off it.

To stop the lies, he made it truth.

That was so powerful. That end. How Gerard lost the faith that everyone else lost so long ago. How the fans meant that much to him that he's go so far to prove them right.

Seriously, you=talent.

January 17th, 2008 at 08:43pm