For the Moment - Comments

Firstly, the simple layout is really nice; I love the blues. I really liked this line: “Above, in the pitch dark sky with a few glittering lights, the moon shines brightly. It casts a glow seen halfway around the world” It put an image in my head and was really creative. The whole story is. When she lied down next to him, it made me smile. Overall, the drabble was really beautiful and I like that you didn’t have to give your characters names to give them a realistic feel, they just were.

If I had to sum this drabble up in one word, I'd choose the word beautiful, 'cause it is! It's so detailed, catching every single little thing that's going on, informing the readers of what exactly is happening. And with the wording that you used, it would really create vivid and clear images in people's minds. I thought it was quite interesting and random, but random in a good way. The layout and the picture went well together, and I think you did a great job on this. Well done. :D

I thought this was fantastically beautiful. =*]
Very well written, and it really feels like your there or something, ya know? Keep up the great work! =]

Everything about this was absolutely perfect, my dreams are never so concrete I always have random thoughts that interrupt a dream or jumble into it. I think I've had one meaningful dream before and in the end, it meant nothing to me. That was a contradicting statement but it's how it went. Anyway, this was cool, and if you ever see that guy again, I'd say go for it (:

I loved how everything really seemed like a dream. The whole atmosphere seemed surreal, the silent agreements and unspoken words. It just gave the whole imagery this stroke of imagination. Your choice of words were just right, not strained or forced, but a nice flow. I love this, it's so beautiful.

This was one of the most touching drabbles I've read in a really long time. There was so much story here that you got out in such a small amount of words, everything I needed was there: you had character development, plot development, everything. It was seriously amazing.