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  • love love love

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    seems like a great story
    December 27th, 2010 at 07:52pm
  • jbcrazed89

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    I love it!
    can't wait to read more!
    December 23rd, 2010 at 06:11am
  • butterfly.kisses.

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    I think the plot in itself is great! The only thing that, I feel, I can complain about is spelling and grammar. I won't harp about them or anything, but maybe for the next chapter, you could proof read a little bit better? :)
    I want to read the next chapter and find out what's happening now that he left? SO...
    Update soon!?
    December 22nd, 2010 at 06:10am
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