This actually made me cry. It seems so real and you just make the characters emotions so accessible, I think would describe it? You can just feel what she's feeling. I think you did great with detailing and it's wonderfully written.
This was awesome in that teary, I'm-going-to-sob-while-reading-this type of way. (:
Sorry it took so long to comment. Beautiful. Very sad. You did wonderfully. I love it. Really, I do. Very well written, meets the sadness level perfectly. Great job. =]
This was awesome in that teary, I'm-going-to-sob-while-reading-this type of way. (: