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  • a2nnyka

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    Ohmaigad. I think there's going to be competition between Halvo and John still at chapter 5. :)
    Hahaha. Mygash. I dont know whether to pick Eric or John. :|
    February 23rd, 2011 at 02:18am
  • a2nnyka

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    I love Peyton. She's so lovable. Weird but very lovable.
    Anyway, I started reading again. :DDD I wont be able to study because of you. >:)
    HAHAHAHAHA! Badass. :)))
    Imma continue reading :)))
    February 23rd, 2011 at 02:00am
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    I love Peyton. She's so lovable. Weird but very lovable.
    Anyway, I started reading again. :DDD I wont be able to study because of you. >:)
    HAHAHAHAHA! Badass. :)))
    Imma continue reading :)))
    February 23rd, 2011 at 01:58am
  • XOXOnyx

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    Omg i love this and i really hope ur stillwriting it.
    February 21st, 2011 at 06:57am
  • ac8123

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    Great chapter! Update soon(: x
    February 20th, 2011 at 10:23pm
  • RunningFromLionsx3

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    This story is awesome! While reason it all I keep goig back and forth between teams.. It's so difficult to pick!
    February 6th, 2011 at 03:16am
  • Simply Ace

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    Oh my gosh! This was sort of what I wanted to happen but not really if that makes any sense at all. Gah! I can't even think of anything to say besides that I'm in shock.
    I'm still team Halvo even if they are lying to John though.
    January 31st, 2011 at 03:57am
  • BelA

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    team john fur sure! he actually cares about her.
    January 31st, 2011 at 01:41am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • StaysFourTheSame

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    I lovee your storyyy :)
    January 30th, 2011 at 10:59am
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    mind equals blown on that one! WOWZA!
    i 'm not gonna lie the end of that was crazy. The whole, meaningless hook ups with Halvo, John's girlfriend breaking up with him. I think i was shocked the most about that, i figured she'd have just been a bitch and lied to him about life some more....

    uh, anyways! I can't wait to read more!!!
    January 30th, 2011 at 09:38am
  • lovely youth

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    OH MY GOD.
    this chapter was just....asoidfasdiofjdsaoifasdoghaodsfijasoidljfasodijlfasffff
    January 30th, 2011 at 01:53am
  • BUSTANUT

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    I can't help but to fall in love with this story!
    My favorite for sure<3
    I can't wait to read more!
    January 29th, 2011 at 11:19pm
  • disappearing act.

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    I can't pick a team.
    January 29th, 2011 at 09:33pm
  • CountEmOneTwoThree

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    I'm in love with this story!
    It's amazing, keep it up :)
    Team Halvo!
    January 29th, 2011 at 07:45pm
  • itsahit

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    First of all, I love how John told her that she was more amazing than Weezy. It made me giggle.
    I think its just so sad the way she's playing Halvo. I think he really likes her, and she's going to hurt him. But by agreeing to not tell John, they both obviously realize it would hurt him. And, of course, the shit is going to hit the fan. He won't be happy that his best friend is hooking up with the girl he likes whether he admits it or not. I'm so sad that John is heartbroken after Melissa dumped him, but he'll have to see that she wasn't even faithful. I doubt the baby is even his.
    But I wonder what Peyton's big secret that she's keeping from John is...
    January 29th, 2011 at 07:32am
  • Window Blues.

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    Omgggg!!!! I loved the update and GOOD. melissa dumped him now peyton could come sweep him offnhis feet : ). Plwase update soon!!!
    January 29th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    Peyton, that slut. John l.o.v.e.s. her and now he's gonna be all sad and heartbroken over some slutty girl who doesn't matter. And Halvo. GOD! HALVO?!?!?! REALLY?! I mean, I can't even hate him and I want too! But it won't be meaningless. Nothing ever is. FUCKING A! When you told me not to hate you I knew what was going to happen - I just didn't realize I'd be this invested and confused.
    January 29th, 2011 at 05:39am
  • dinugget

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
    Don't hook up with Eric
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    BECAUSE SHE REALIZED IT'S NOT HER BABY! hahaha jk but I totes mcgotes saw this coming! and I also feel John finding out about Halvo and Peyton hooking up
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:46am
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