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  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Oh my goodness. I don't even know if I'm team John or team Eric! They're both so good!
    I feel like John and Peyton go well together because they understand each other
    BUT Eric has a point with John getting all the girls.
    And I think John will be really upset when/if he finds out about Eric and Peyton potentially hooking up.
    So that's what I have to say.
    And thank you for commenting!! I think I'm going to start another John story but I'm kind of thinking about a plot for now. And you're totally welcome for the shout out. You deserve it!!:)
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • fightingthewolf

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    Team John, definately.

    This is amazing, I love this story.

    Creech
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • coast of maine.

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    How could you end this here ? That's cruel and just evil, very evil.
    Especially since I know there probably won't be another update this weekend, I'll just wait and wait.
    This was amazing, though (:
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • ineedacatchyname

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    I loooove it ugh I can't wait to see what happens next :]
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • MissPunkRawk

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    I'm Team Nick. Lol. Not with Peyton, but with myself.
    January 26th, 2011 at 05:46pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Gah. Can't decide. John or Halvo? Gah. So confused.
    January 26th, 2011 at 05:45pm
  • itsahit

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    I loved that John wants to help her do the list, and that she got up the nerve to do karaoke. I was really glad that Halvo had the sense to not put money on a bet for who beds her first. There's enough boys clamoring for her attention, plus a rowdy Texas bar full of strangers?! Damn, Peyton's going to have to figure out what she's going to do. I think she and Halvo are adorable, but its clear that John is the better choice.
    January 26th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • lovely youth

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    This chapter was awesome!
    I have to say that I'm Team JohnO, even though Halvo is adorable and I love him.
    January 25th, 2011 at 07:27am
  • Simply Ace

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    Eh, usually I would be a team John member like... 200 percent but I don't know. Something in me is really hoping that Peyton and John can be just friends. I think she and Halvo sound utterly adorable together so I'm going to have to say I'm a team Halvo member for sure- well, so far haha. They'd just make an amazing couple I think, and a funny one at that too :)
    I'm loving the companionship between Peyton and John. Lovely update :D
    January 25th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • dinugget

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    I'm team JohnO :)
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • ineedacatchyname

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    team John Oh all the way :]
    January 25th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    God, I'm in love. Love. Love. Love. I mean... I love Halvo and his creepiness - but he's not John. Plus, John's not even gonna be a dad. So he can hit it w. Peyton no big deal.
    January 25th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    January 25th, 2011 at 01:56am
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    omg. i cannot wait until john finds out about melissa and then he'll be with peyton! :D
    January 25th, 2011 at 01:50am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    Awwww!!!! John is so in love with her!! But he's gonna be so heartbroken when he finds out about Melissa:(

    Update soon!!! And thanks for the comment!!
    January 25th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • raja sahara

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    Team John, duh. But I do love Halvo :)
    Great update!
    January 25th, 2011 at 01:00am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I think I'm team Halvo because that seems more fun!
    January 25th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • ac8123

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    Team John all the way!haha Lovely chapter! xx
    January 25th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • disappearing act.

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    I love you too boo boo. & I seriously don't know what team I am on. Maybe it was your story i was reading hahaha
    January 25th, 2011 at 12:36am
  • coast of maine.

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    So usually the stereotypical country western type Texas thing pisses me off, since I've lived in Texas my whole life, but this is actually right in the ball park. If you were to walk into a country bar here, everyone does have cowboy hats on and cowboy boots with plaid shirts. I was actually at one the other week and it was pretty exact, minus the karaoke because it wasn't a karaoke country bar, but we do have tons of those. So that was pretty hilarious and I could legit imagine Halvo dressed like that.

    Oh jeez, this was great. Update soon (:
    January 25th, 2011 at 12:33am