February 18th, 2012 at 10:43am
Sparks - Comments
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I just re-read this story for the umpteenth time. I miss it, it was really good lol, even inspired me to pre-write a few things...in my head, of course, lol.September 10th, 2011 at 07:03am
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Aw, how cute of a chapter!July 17th, 2011 at 10:46pm
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yay equality.July 17th, 2011 at 09:41pm
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loved it, can't wait for moreJuly 17th, 2011 at 09:27pm
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Is the fourth chapter foreshadowing?July 8th, 2011 at 03:39am
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you don't suck, it was good....I can't wait to read moreJuly 7th, 2011 at 05:03am
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oh no they're gonna be found aren't they? because of the interview they gave!
aw man update soon please and let me be wrong >_<July 7th, 2011 at 02:16am -
I hope they do adopt, they seemed to love having Max around, ahha(:July 7th, 2011 at 12:49am
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I am ridiculously in love with this story!July 7th, 2011 at 12:28am
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Yes!!! It's up!!! lol don't make fun of me cause I'm 3 chapters late! It was amazing and I can't wait for more!!!!! Update soon pleaseJune 11th, 2011 at 11:33pm
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i loved this story!
I like the idea of it and omg their adopting! :)June 11th, 2011 at 04:57pm -
well i'm glad the interviewer was alright, ahha.
and kids? That would be cute (:June 11th, 2011 at 03:42pm -
ADOPTING?
Looks like Elliot had a little Freudian slip there....June 11th, 2011 at 02:50pm -
Adoption O.O though it would be cute, I'm not sure how that'll work out. Can't wait to see everyone's reactions to the simple fact they're together x)June 11th, 2011 at 08:33am
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It didn't turn out to bad - the interveiw that is. The chapter turned out fantastic ! :D
I hope the adopt. That'd be soo cute <3June 11th, 2011 at 07:12am -
KIDS. Lol. That was cute.June 11th, 2011 at 05:43am
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really good, I loved itJune 11th, 2011 at 05:32am
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i'm pretty sure that interview is not going to be a good thing :/
<3June 9th, 2011 at 09:10pm -
Oooh! I enjoyed this! I think you succeeded in writing for guys point of view! I really enjoyed the first chapter, it had nice description, but the second... I got about half way through and it lost my intrest. I kind of skimmed the rest. I really liked the layout. It was chic, simply but nice, classy. It went well with the story! Good job!June 9th, 2011 at 03:55am
I miss it!