Wow, another story I haven't commented on. I suck. Anyway, I love this story. I think Max's and Ronnie's fighting and bickering is pretty funny, they are so immature. Anyway, great story.
I have to say a big HOLY SHIZ! Haha soo much packed into this last chapter! Haha the pic of Ronnie after she changed made me lol. It's so like him. Haha can't wait for the next one!!:D
Not to bitch or anything, but did you realize that after Sam's dream in chapter fifteen it all stayed italics, what is mean is wasn't Sam's dream only spouse to be italics not the rest of the story. But anyway great chapter, can't wait for more :D