July 15th, 2012 at 05:24pm
Nice layout, I enjoy it very much.
It makes me chuckle. Along with Kevin being gay.
I'm super happy with the murders and everything else.
The only thing I'm going to pick on you for is because it's not finished
Lovely descriptions though. The blood the gore, and everything. Just simply wonderful
Anyways. Like I said, really well written, and I really enjoyed reading it.
I have to admit that I did sort of read this as a parody (the fact that they're hiding from screaming fangirls was a nice touch), but I think it works great as a parody because there's that humor seeped in, but it's still written seriously. There aren't dumb jokes every other sentence or obnoxious silliness like a lot of parodies I've read have relied on.
I have two guesses as to who the killer is. Miley Cyrus, because that would be totally hilarious. I could see her being jealous that they're getting more fame than she is and going on a rampage to get rid of the competition. And then going off of Miley Cyrus, I thought of Liam Hemsworth since they are engaged and he could be jealous of Beebz and the JoBros.
Agh, you need to finish dis so I will know