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  • bellamy blake

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    AGH THIS IS FIFTY SHADES OF EPICNESS! Crazy
    I have to admit that I did sort of read this as a parody (the fact that they're hiding from screaming fangirls was a nice touch), but I think it works great as a parody because there's that humor seeped in, but it's still written seriously. There aren't dumb jokes every other sentence or obnoxious silliness like a lot of parodies I've read have relied on.
    I have two guesses as to who the killer is. Miley Cyrus, because that would be totally hilarious. I could see her being jealous that they're getting more fame than she is and going on a rampage to get rid of the competition. And then going off of Miley Cyrus, I thought of Liam Hemsworth since they are engaged and he could be jealous of Beebz and the JoBros.
    Agh, you need to finish dis so I will know Coffee
    July 15th, 2012 at 05:24pm
  • Saul Hudson

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    Nice layout, I enjoy it very much.
    It makes me chuckle. Along with Kevin being gay.
    I'm super happy with the murders and everything else.
    The only thing I'm going to pick on you for is because it's not finished File
    Lovely descriptions though. The blood the gore, and everything. Just simply wonderful
    Anyways. Like I said, really well written, and I really enjoyed reading it.
    January 15th, 2011 at 11:08pm
  • fooleish

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    THIS IS SO AMAZING. SERIOUSLY. LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA THE MAGNITUDE OF THE AMAZINGNESS THAT THIS POSSESSES. SRSRLY.
    But, uh, the totally serious part? Don't think you're quite managing that, 'cause I'm still sort of giggling, mostly at Kevin's internal monologue. You're doing well, though; it's gory and weird and just a little bit scary. I'm very very curious as to what exactly this shadow/silhouette thing is... so hurry up and post the rest of it!

    (Also: I love that you're writing this from Kevin's POV. He's totally my favourite Jonas. File tehe)
    December 30th, 2010 at 02:51pm
  • flyer.

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    Oh, man. Is it bad that I'm laughing inside? Justin Bieber and Kevin Jonas...well, at least Kevin gets some love? :P Yeah, that's how I'm going to rationalize reading this, since it's completly not what I usually read. And it's not really the rating I read at.....but so so funny. Even if people's hearts are getting cut out, I'm still more than slightly amused :D
    December 30th, 2010 at 01:09am
  • waits.

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    Oh my gosh, Jennie. lmfao

    This is just... beyond words. XD

    Woman, post the next chapter! ;)
    December 29th, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • loverfayce.

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    Sorry, but by your own rules, you're disqualified. File

    KEVIIIIIIIN!!!! YOU DID PICK HIM!
    I want the slash part up. Now.
    December 29th, 2010 at 09:58am
  • Roseh; believe

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    I actually cannot wait for you to get this up. I'm looking forward to it like you have no idea XD
    December 24th, 2010 at 12:14pm