December 26th, 2010 at 02:41pm
the layout is nice, but I think you should get an atl picture in there or something :)
I think there should also be a summary, tha'ts what gets the reader into it.
The content is great though, the flow is really nice, which you can't say for too many authors
I'm interestng in finding more about this Josh guy as well ;)
you got a realy good start on this, great job!
Anyways, thanks for letting me know about this story, this is some great story I can really glue my eyes to :D
And yeah, go Alex! Wait... Should I root for Lexi or Alex? Oh well, Alex is a guy so... Go Alex! Go change Lexi's mind! LOLZ