When It's All Over - Comments

update?

Why are all you're stories to amazing?!
It's not fair! Why can't I be this good at writing
sob (sits in pool of own misery)
It seem you enjoy locking two charicters together in a confined space and then see what happens...
Hehe

I like this a lot :)

I've found myself reading most of your stories lately thoughj, you're a really talented writer.
Hope you update soon!

I really like this! It's an awesome idea, and great writing!

I feel dumb for asking this, but what's a neko?

Anyway... love the rest of it, it's awesome! Keep up the good work!

Ha ha.^^. lls I really like this so you should continue this. Lls. I'm the second and third commenter!!! Yay

yay!
second AND first commenter!
PAGE CLAIM! ATW! :D
anywaysssss
i loved it :)
udpate soooooooooon :)
kill better stay away from the twins -.-

i love the idea
but u asked me to judge the pics

1. i love the shapeshifter he's adorable and gorgeous, but he doesnt rrly fit with the kitty... i mean like, i expected him to be more of a... idk... like if you want him to be a cat, make him into a bigger cat, like... a lion cub bcz of his hair? or yeah the kitty looks kinda too young to be the guy

2. the twins look nothing alike, and i dont like the black haired one since he looks asian. try using the same model? for both pictures to accent the fact that their twins? and try to match the hair colour to the colour of the animal's coat... and dun make em all kittens xD even though i love the two kittens in the basket. so cute! :)

3. i think the vampire looks younger and more innocent than the shapeshifter... srry :/