why doesnt she live on through her life, find a new guy, more children, and have her still write letters to her love until the day she dies? make like 50 more chapters...let it take awhile, make it a true EPIK
I love this so much! Telling the story through letters was a really unique way of telling your story and I think it suited it perfectly. I was a bit confused at the start as to who was the boy and who was the girl because I have a boy character named Emery in my short story 'Fireworks'. Huh. Once I figured that out, I kept reading, I wanted more. This was so cute, but not overly sappy. Everything fitted together perfectly and the simple writing style really suited. LOVELOVELOVE Subscribing! So you better update soon, 'kay?! - Becca Arrington :)
Why is it that only kids can act like this? Why is it so wrong for a guy to want to be our prince? -.- Great job, and great description. Just watch your grammar and punctuation. Otherwise, it's amazing.