Brother, Protect Me Now - Comments

*ovaries exploded*
damn am i happy i found this you are fucking amazing and so it this story love it <3

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you're amazing. this is amazing. i can't even. -dies-

This is the best fucking Waycest I've ever read.
And I may have raided the internet ten times over for the perfect one.
This is it.
Jesus. Amazing.

Wow. I saw a link to this on Daimon's page and decided to click it, just for the hell of it... boy am I glad that I made this decision. This was, without a doubt, one of the best Waycest's that I have ever read, whether on this site or anywhere else. The entire piece was just... hot, for lack of a better word. The sheer chemistry between them was just wonderfully sexy; you did an amazing job with that. The description was wonderful; I could picture everything (and I mean everything) that was going on, but it didn't seem like an excess of detail, if that makes any sense.

And that ending! I burst out laughing. As soon as the sexiness started, I couldn't help but wonder if someone was going to walk out but by the end, it was still a surprise. Of course it would be Frank as well. :P

Basically overall, this was amazing. It seemed realistic in a great way and I am so envious of your ability to write such amazing chemistry. I'm going to subscribe so that I don't forget about this.

I promised you a proper comment, didn't I?
You already know I love it - it's on top of the list of my recommended stories <3
But... The actual comment. First of all, it's genius, quite simply, in being a realistic Waycest (as realistic as that could ever be, but). You get major brownie points for that.
I like your writing style a lot (that goes for both this and your frosting-story (the exact title of which I don't remember)), and how you manage to use a third person narrator while still keeping close to the characters. That's actually hard to pull off, but you do it magnificently.
The way you build up the 'plot' in the story is really rather impressive. From the stage acts (love the quick description of the rest of the concert), to on the tour bus where the two others leave (darling Frank, so easily distracted), to Mikey actually kissing Gerard. I love that you have Mikey taking the initiative. Simply, love.
There are some points of this story I particularly want to point out, my absolute favourite being the part "Gerard practically giggled; he'd never seen his brother quite so hot and bothered. "Keep going…" Mikey moaned and Gerard was floored; he'd definitely never heard his brother sound like that.! - Up until then Gerard has been sort of on top of the situation and seemingly collected. But right there he is, in your words, floored, and I love it.
I also love the point in time where he calls Mikey over without even looking at him and I love that Mikey finds it annoying that his brother is not even looking up from the text.
The point in time where Gerard grabs Mikey's face and tells him to relax (and how you make that lead up to this kiss) also works very well in my opinion, especially with Gerard's comment in the end, "Didn't I tell you to relax? Fuckin' relax.".
I still don't know who is actually making the last comment, "Are you fuckin' serious, Frank?!", but apart from the fact that I would like to know who you imagine to be saying it, I kinda like the fact that there is no absolute answer.
All I am left to wonder is when Frank re-entered the "room". Personally, I imagine it to be around Mikey 'practically yelling' "Oh, Jesus fucking Christ!".
Do you "know" when Frank entered? (As in, do you have a clear idea in your mind or was he... just there, when you reached the end of the story? If you understand?)

All in all - love.
I really do hope you write something more. Soon.

OmZ I fuckin loved it

Soo hot! You should write more :D

I agree with BehindTheScenes turned me on too :) good job

The best fuckin' Waycest sex scene I've ever read, plain and simple.
It's no wonder you have so many comments already. Your writing is fantastic! ;D
I'm in love with this story, and there's only one chapter, that's fucking talent right there.
I am subscribing to this lovely story, and really hope that you'll put more up soon. :)
Also, just to let you know, I've been sitting in the nurses office feeling like complete shit, and this story made me feel better. XD
Wonderful, wonderful job on this!

xoxx ~Frankie Boy.

Fucking fantastic!
I remember seeing this on facebook, aha,
it was amazing!
I've wanted just a short, hot waycest for a while. well done;'D

oh dear holy mother Mary that was just amazing!!! i dont think ive ever read a story that seemed to have so much love masked as lust it was just amazing this is definatly the best story i think i ve ever read thank u for posting it i loved it

Um. I APPROVE OF THIS THING HERE.

I honestly really don't have words except fuhuiehfrhefbcit843tf4rgfuiwdcu difcy r37fxt because this honestly killed me.

One of, if not the, best waycests on Mibba, hands down. One of my favorites, ever.

Honestly, like, I've read a lot of good waycests over my time on mibba and Livejournal, but this basically blows them out of the fuxking water.

Well that was, uh, holyfuckingshit. I'm lost for words, that was hot to say the least. I loved the ending, I bet Frank had a good time watching that show ;)

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No, I loved that so much, gah. I'm gonna end this before I embarrass myself.

...Jesus fuck. I don't even have any words right now but that was just... incredible. One of my favourite ever Waycests, not even kidding. You managed to make everything sound so real, your turn of phrase is just really eloquent and I loved the content as well, I thought it was an amazing scene and that's exactly how I imagine Danger Days era Waycest to go down. Oh, and it was fuckin' hot.

Hehe that was cute...and hot...and epic...

-+- Spiffy :)

Is it sad to say that this turned me on quite a bit?
Well , I don't even know what to say.
Utterly amazing.
Of course Frank can't leave two boys alone to do their dirty , dirty deed.
<3
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I loved this story, really. Great job. Destroya is ALL I've been fucking listening to on Danger Days recently and Gerard's moans are amazing. I've been a MCR fan forever but I just got into things like Frerard and Waycest espically 'cause I noticed the sparks between the band mates everyone's been talking about. I'm not a perv either but I wouldn't mind some un-brotherly Way love. Great job again and thanks. :)

*sighs*
I just want you to know...
I'm fucking in love with you.

This shit was ..fucking unbelievable. Omfg the greatest christmas gift i fucking got today. Damn.. that makes me wanna do bad things... I love it.

Make more sexy sexy waycests like this... :)

Hot damn. I feel so dirty reading this, but jesus christ, it was fantastic.

OMG comment virginity!!!!
lol now that that is over ...
this has to be one of my favorite freards to date!