Teenage Dream - Comments

I decided a while back to read your stories, but I never found the time. This morning I decided to print this story out and took it with me to school and read it in class.
The first thought that crossed my mind was that you write beautifully. I'm reading this book right now, and compared to your writing, the other book is written childishly. The way you describe everything is amazing. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories ^^ Sorry I didn't earlier... :p

xoxo

Before I say my official comment, I think I might have found a typo? "He rejoined me, his eyes searching my face for a few seconds before he sat back on his heels to keep his weight off my me." Off my me doesn't really make that much sense, I think you might have meant "off of me"?

Official comment:
I could say how beautiful it was - the ending - so passionate without going into an insane amount of detail (very touching, really); I could say I love the way you set the scene with it being dark and the city lights creating a beautiful setting; and technically I just did say all of these things - but I also want to say that I clean my room when I'm bored/stressed/to calm myself down too. :3

This was beautifully written, loved it :)