No!!! I had hope that she'd get away from Master in that hospital and you went and tore it awaaaay!!!! But super excited to see how it'll end, especially in two chapters! Keep up the fantasm.
Run, run, bunny, run. Run, run, bunny run! Sorry. That's what the last bit of the chapter made me think of. I'm so excited to find out what's going on!!! Merry Christmas! more soon please? :)
I've got it. You know what your detail reminds me of? Every Stephen King story I've ever read. He has this way of talking about a lamp for four pages but making me actually want to read it instead of skip over it to the part that doesn't suck. ANYWAYS. You got me on the edge of my seat bro. More please? :)
I'm really into this story already! The description is very well detailed without being boring and draggy. I can't wait to see what the hell is going on! Keep up the great work
December 24th, 2010 at 02:14pm
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