HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE. SERIOUSLY. PLEASE. THIS IS THE FIRST I'VE FOUND THAT DOESN'T HAVE IMMEDIATE PERSONALITY CHANGES AFTER THE FIRST CHAPTER. PLEASE. PLEASE. I LOVE YOU. IS THAT CREEPY? DO IT.
Why do I have to find this after it's been discontinued? D: It's fabulous! The change of language between Daryl and Oli is magnificent, it's easy to tell which is which, a skill to be looked upon with praise.
I'm glad we got into Oli's head, see what he really thinks and how he thinks about himself and his brother!. I don;t knowhow he can be that way though!, it's so sad for Daryl who believes that his bother would literally let his freinds kill him!!. I think something should happen to Daryl that makes Oli realize what is going on, because I'm assuming he doesn't know about how his brother is anorexic because he thinks oli is repulsed by him! :O Can;t wait for another update...I love it!!! xx
I'm glad we got into Oli's head, see what he really thinks and how he thinks about himself and his brother!. I don;t knowhow he can be that way though!, it's so sad for Daryl who believes that his bother would literally let his freinds kill him!!. I think something should happen to Daryl that makes Oli realize what is going on, because I'm assuming he doesn't know about how his brother is anorexic because he thinks oli is repulsed by him! :O Can;t wait for another update...I love it!!! xx