This has a...rhythm, almost. A haunting, fast paced rhythm that just stops abruptly at the last line. And it certainly makes this different, unique...interesting. Your description is great, and I'm amazed at the pictures you manage to paint with just a few words. Overall, lovely job!
And it certainly makes this different, unique...interesting.
Your description is great, and I'm amazed at the pictures you manage to paint with just a few words.
Overall, lovely job!