I'm Sick of All of These Stupid so Called Fans - Comments

So... cliche is what you think of this?
That may be true. This may be the most cliche, typical, one-shot idea I've ever seen used.
But you know what? Who cares?
Even though it is cliche, I loved every single word of it. You know why? Because it was based on truth, as well as it having your opinion. People do treat Kevin like crap. Why? I don't really know. I mean, really, he looks similar to both Nick and Joe... so I don't really get how people can call him ugly when Joe and Nick look almost exactly like him, besides having a few differences. And I don't get how they could exclude him because without him... they wouldn't be the Jonas Brothers. Because Kevin has always been in the band. People use the excuse that he doesn't really sing in any of the songs and all this crap and how he like, doesn't sing solo... but so what? Maybe he's modest. Maybe he just loves being the one who plays the guitar in the group and helps background vocals. What should it matter as long as he loves what he's doing? And maybe it's a good thing that he's not more upfront, because like you pointed out in the comments we've exchanged, the whole time they've been famous... he's the only one that's actually stayed grounded the whole time, even if they all have claimed to be the whole time. Even though he's dated more than one girl, he's stayed with one longer than Nick or Joe have stayed with any of their's! And for people who call him gay, it's like, hello, he's married to a girl! So he can't be!
So... I pretty much agree with everything you had in this one-shot... 100%. And I'm glad that you put it back up, because you should be proud of your opinion and be proud of what you wrote, because this one-shot is seriously amazing.
And as cliche as it may be... this is the best one-shot I've ever read, PERIOD, using this idea. :)
And too make it even better... it was very romantic, with how Amelia went after him like that, and told him how she felt. And how she felt that way for the longest time, it wasn't just one of those things where they knew each other for a few months and thought they loved each other; there love is real in this one-shot. I honestly couldn't have asked you to write this any better, because it is seriously the best it can be. :)
You are an amazing writer. Never stop writing, because you will be publishing hundreds of books one day, with your writing skills. :D
I reccomend this one-shot for anyone else who just happens to be reading this comment! :D

I read this a couple weeks back, and I loved it.
I read it again just now and I fell more in love with it.
I agree with the whole entire statement that Kevin doesn't get appreciated for all he does for JB.
Without Kev, JB wouldn't exist, or they most defiantly wouldn't be the same.
The story was adorable, and I can't believe this was your very first one shot ever. It was amazing and still is <3 <3 <3

awh this is so, so cute <333 and really, for it being your first one shot ever, it's not that bad. there's definitely much worse around the internet :D

i know exactly what you mean, that feeling that your early writing gives you. my first completed piece was a six-part matt good story on quizilla and it was so horrible, but of course i love it because that was a huge accomplishment at the time.

I REMEMBER THIS.
DON'T REMOVE THIS AGAIN OR IM GOING TO KARATE YOUR ASS FROM WHERE YOU'RE AT TO WHERE IM AT.
I love this. I love Kevin and your writing then was good :)