Wow....that was sweety but steamy...two words that i thought i'd only use for foood...!!! two thumbs up for you....*but if i were an alien...i would definitely give you four* ;)
OMG!!!!! That was fucking hot! Why didn't anyone comment?? You did an amazing job! Better than people older. Which makes me wonder.... Anyway I don't see how you could have done it any better. I love the way you wrote it. It's perfect.