Damn, do your stories always get this popular, darling? Anyways~ I already commented on this. Yeah, I know. But I'm doing it again for my contest~ You write terribly sad things that make me want to cry. It was amazing. ♥ x)
That was really intense, and really moving. It was so believable to - I could really see that happening to someone. I'm glad you asked me to read this, it's really lovely in a slightly upsetting way: well done, I could never write as well as that :D
i'm not of A7X, but this story was absolutely amazing. i loved the story line, and the emotion that was embedded in the story, it was just lovely. you truly did a great job with this piece, and i'm excited to read more of your stories!
Mean author for making me come and read this only so I could be all sad...and on today of all days! But I have to admit, I was a little curious as to what the accident was...the one where she lost her daughter...but I am glad I read this, it was sweet...bitter sweet but you get the idea...I did like it ^_^ And I listened to that song during the tribute video and I have to say, it's the song I could actually enjoy off of their Waking The Fallen cd...yeah...that being said, I'm even more interested to see where you'll go with the entry for my contest.
I'm just going to view this as if it were an original fiction :) This was quite good. I think you're description of Guinivere's reaction to the accident was particularly effective. It was believable to. Istead of something overdramatized, instead it was a sincerely heartfelt and moving description of a mother who has just lost her daughter. By making her reaction so human, it was easier to relate to Guinevere's feelings of loss, making it easy to sympathise with her. I don't know any of the band's songs, but I think the one at the end of the story fit it perfectly. It seemed to sum up all the feelings and themes running through the story. This was good, well done.
You know, have I ever mentioned I hated you? I told you I'm a sap, and you made me read this, and now I'm crying! >.< I loved it, a lot, but I still hate you for making me cry.
(No, seriously. I love you, come back from Hawaii now. hah)